Where I live is always quiet but sometimes my next door neighbor argues or has a party (which is annoying). Around my house i live near two parks and a shop and i live near my school i go to.
Kia ora Vaiola, Thanks for completing another task! I really liked how you use the word "annoying" in your writing and that is exactly what the activity request you to do which is use lots of adjectives words to describe your town. However, in order for you to gain full points for this activity I need you to write and use more adjectives words in your post, perhaps you could describe a bit more about the parks and your school? Give it a go and let me know. Keep up with the good work! Kia kaha, Patricia
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Vaiola,
ReplyDeleteThanks for completing another task! I really liked how you use the word "annoying" in your writing and that is exactly what the activity request you to do which is use lots of adjectives words to describe your town. However, in order for you to gain full points for this activity I need you to write and use more adjectives words in your post, perhaps you could describe a bit more about the parks and your school? Give it a go and let me know.
Keep up with the good work!
Kia kaha,
Patricia