“Yeah and now we have autumn” replied James
They continued to walk to school suddenly Jacob push his bike and James fall down to the ground that it was really hurtful, that his knee was bleeding that he really need help Jacob was trying to help his friend but he just felt guilty of himself that he hurt his own friend.
So a car stop by and helped James get up and gave him a plaster . “Sorry James” Jacob Resopnly said
“It okay Jacob” James Replied
They finally went inside school and was really happy that they straight away went to class before they were late
Today me and lily made this short narrative writing ! This is mainly about two boys and autumn leaves
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