NARRATIVE PLAN

Brainstorm of ideas:
Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, , man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking

PEOPLE/SETTING
PROBLEM
SOLUTION
Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,
Car crash
A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service
No glasses so couldn’t see
injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts
Firefighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
On the phone
Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.
Fire extinguisher, put sawdust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.





Title:
Car Crash
Intro
2 sentences
One bright sunny day a drunk man was driving in his car and suddenly his wheel started making loud noises.
Orientation 5-10 sentences
WHEN
WHO
WHAT
WHERE
WHY
HOW
CHARACTERS
The drunk drivers name is John Cena and he is 60 years old. John came near the mountain because there was traffic and then he stopped the car and waiting for the cars to go. He was going to pick his friends up because they were going to eat lunch.
Problem
5-10 sentences
Suddenly he forgot that he left his petrol engine open so he clicked his seat belt and then jumped out of the car because he didn’t want to die.


Solution
5-10 sentences
John got his phone out of his pocket and call the police and the fire fighters. The police and the fire fighters came and the firefighters got there and got there fire extinguisher and put some sawdust on the petrol before the car explodes.
Conclusion
Less than 5 sentences
John said he would never do that ever agin.