I am a learner at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Miss Ashley.
Wednesday, 31 October 2018
Tuesday, 25 September 2018
How to use different kinds of punctuation
Brackets.
Miss Ashley’s example:
Mum gave Lucy (her favourite daughter) $10 for lunch.
Miss Ashley had 27 students (both girls and boys) in her class.
My examples:
- Miss park had 9 year 5s in her team for netball (both girls and boys)
- Miss ashley gave her daughter( her only daughter) some lollies to eat.Colon and semi-colon.BEFORE: BETWEEN; Miss Ashley’s example: Mary went to the fruit shop and bought lots of different fruit. She bought: bananas; pears; apples; and a pineapple. The girls team had 10 players. The team was: Hiria; Ana; Maria; Vina; Lily; Vaiola and Maani. My examples: There are 7 colours in the Rainbow. The Colours are: Red; Orange; Yellow; Green; Blue; Indigo And violet. There are 5 people in the netball team. They are: Hiria; Maria; Vaiola; Ana; And Vina Commas in listing. Miss Ashley’s example: The girls team had 10 players. The team was Hiria, Ana, Maria, Vina, Lily, Vaiola and Maani. My examples: Today Me, Ana, Maria, Hiria, Vina, Lily, And Maani went outside and played on the park There are 26 people in our class. The girls are Ana, Hiria, Maria, Lily, Waiari, Sumuree, Syraiahlee, Vina, Brackets. Miss Ashley’s example: Mum gave Lucy (her favourite daughter) $10 for lunch. Miss Ashley had 27 students (both girls and boys) in her class. My examples: Miss park had 9 year 5s in her team for netball (both girls and boys) Miss ashley gave her daughter( her only daughter) some lollies to eat.
Blindfold Challage
INTRO - On Friday 21st September 2018 Room 7 students did a blindfold challenge for fun. Miss Ashley arranged the furniture and we got in to buddys.
WHAT: Blindfold challenge.
WHERE: room 7
WHY: For fun
WHEN: Friday 21st September 2018, 9.10am
HOW: got into buddies, Miss Ashley arranged the furniture
WHO: Room 7 students
PARAGRAPH 1:
Get in buddies
Miss Ashley gave instructions and rules - points.
In your head, made a plan of which way to go
Say who your buddy was.
PARAGRAPH 2: WHEN YOU WERE BLINDFOLDED
Feelings: paralysed, nervous, scared, excited, sleepy, felt comfortable because I had done it before, trust my buddy??? Felt like i was going the wrong. Felt like a robot.
How did it feel to have a blindfold on?
Happened: lost points because we touched the paper/tables, fell over,
Banged into each other.
Table pushed me to the side
Furniture was like spikes in Fortnite.
Screaming like it was a justin bieber concert
Kaboom
“ahhh”
PARAGRAPH 3: WHEN YOU WERE TELLING YOUR BUDDY WHERE TO GO
Tell them to “go straight, go left and right, go on the chair and jump on it, crawl, climb over, duck, stop stop stop, lean over, reach out, grab the chair, step over, confirm or deny”
Felt like the general of an army, an army of one.
Felt like: excited, angry, nervous, strong, fearless, in control,
CONCLUSION: (Choose one of these)
My favourite was..
I felt ..
It was easy/hard because..
I would or wouldn’t do this again because...
“ Put everything away that's in your hand said miss Ashley” On Friday 21st September 2018 at 9:10 am Room 7 students did a blindfold challenge for fun. Miss Ashley arranged the furniture and we got in to buddies.
First we got into buddies and my buddy was Hiria. Me and hiria lined up on the heater and waited for Miss Ashley to give us instructions, rules and points.
When I was blindfold I felt happy and I felt like I could trust my buddy because she was friend. If we touched the tables or paper we will lose points. Tables pushed me away and the tables and chairs. “ Bang said Hiria”
“Yasss we are done I replied”
When I was telling my buddy where to go. I had to tell Hiria to go straight left right grab the chair and climb over it. I felt scared because i didn't know if i'm going to do it right.
My favourite was doing this challenge because it was my first time doing this .
I felt Excited
It was easy/hard because It was easy because all you had to do was listen to your buddy and do what they said
I would or wouldn’t do this again because I would do it again because it was fun
Ideas
Structure and language
Organisation
Vocabulary
Sentence structure
Punctuation
Spelling
Next steps/things to work on
WHEN YOU ARE FINISHED:
Author: Vaiola
Checked by: Vaiola
Recount checklist ✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓
Surface features
Searched
Found
Fixed
Capital letters at the beginning of a sentence
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Capital ‘I’
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Capital letters for names of places and people
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Full stops at the end of a sentence
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Speech marks when people are talking
✓
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Punctuation - ? ! ; : ‘
✓
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Words are written in past tense
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Connectives - next, then, afterwards
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X
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X
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Interesting and difficult adjectives
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Deep features
Introduction has who, what, when, where, why, and how
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Conclusion has a reflective statement or says how you felt
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Ideas/events in the right order
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3 paragraphs
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Metaphors and similes
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Onomatopoeia, alliteration and/or idiom
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Different types of sentences - short, long, compound and complex
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One thing that (name) did well was…
One thing that (name) needs to work on:
Monday, 24 September 2018
Editing a story
Things we learnt about were
We aren’t allowed to use then, and, also and because at the beginning of a sentence.
Speech marks go on the OUTSIDE of the full stop or other punctuation.
The end of a sentence can be marked by a full stop, an exclamation mark or a question mark. You don’t need to put an extra full stop after a question mark.
Remember to check ALL capital letters. Sometimes we need to put them in and sometimes we need to take them out.
On Monday 24th September 2018 Room 7 did a blindfold challenge. We wanted to have fun and make our morning a bit interesting by playing a game.
Firstly Miss Ashley told us the rules which was “no touching the tables or pieces of paper on the floor or you will lose points.“ However you are allowed to touch the chairs because you sometimes have to step over them to get to the end. Next we got into buddies. My buddy was Lucina. We had to line up by the heater in our buddies.
First it was my turn to go so Lucina (my buddy) put the blindfold on me (over my eyes) and helped me to stand up. The blindfold was tight it felt like a constrictor boa on my face. I felt so confused and disorientated because the blindfold was covering my eyes. Lucina told me to “go left, right, straight and step over.” I was feeling nervous and a little bit scared because “what if she was tricking me?“ and I was really doing something silly. I got to the end safely and took my blindfold off.
Next it was my buddies turn so I helped her put the blindfold on. I told her to walk straight first, then next turn left. She doesn’t know her lefts and rights so she went the wrong way.I said “no your other left” and it was a little bit funny. In the end we got to the blue fruit tray and we made it without losing any points!
I think I would like to do this activity again because it was cool to do something different and fun in class especially since it’s the end of the term and I think we are all feeling kind of tired.
Thursday, 20 September 2018
Create Volcano Speech
A volcano is a mountain with a hole where lava comes from. Parts of the volcano is lava, throat, molten magma, secondary vent, ash cloud and vent.
When a volcano is active, materials come out of it. The materials include lava, steam, ash and broken rock pieces.
Vulcan is a man that is a Roman God of Fire and when he gets angry most of the volcanoes erupt. That’s where the word volcano comes from.
There are 1,500 active volcanoes in the world. Most of these volcanoes is around the ring of fire. There are 452 volcanoes in the Ring of Fire. 75% of the Earth’s volcanoes + 90% of the Earth’s earthquakes happen here.
Volcanoes form when magma from the outer core pushes through the crust of the Earth. Once the magma is out of the crust it is called lava. A ash cloud forms when the volcano erupts and smoke rising up which is the ash cloud.
There are three different kinds of volcanoes. They are dormant, active and extinct. Dormant means they have erupted in the past but are sleeping at the moment so won’t erupt. Active volcanoes can erupt soon. Extinct volcanoes erupt a long time ago and won’t erupt again.
These are the rocks from the volcano that erupted
scoria.PumiceLava BombBasaltObsidian.
By Hiria, Vaiola, Ana and Maria.
Yesterday Me, Hiria, Ana And Maria made a volcano for ako evening. We also made a goggle doc for our information about the volcano. This a the google doc we made.
Monday, 17 September 2018
PLANNING FOR WRITING Yoga
PLANNING FOR WRITING.
INTRODUCTION:
WHAT: partner yoga challenge
WHERE: inside Room 7
WHEN: Monday 17th September 2018, in the morning, first thing in the morning
WHO: Room 7 students
WHY: have fun
HOW: miss had a slideshow, kids in partners.
KEYWORDS
Flexible, splits, lift, push, hold yourself up, hold hands, clasp hands, grip, hips, shoulders, balance, fall, collapse, tumble, flattened,
PARAGRAPH 1:
Roll, got into partners, move the furniture away,
Miss explained what we were doing
First pose - easy, happy, going to get harder, confused, confident, trust and feel comfortable with partner
PARAGRAPH 2:
Challenging
Making shapes with our bodies
Keeping calm, trying your best
Which ones did you try AND FAIL? The one we tried and we failed was the bridge one and the sitting one.
Which ones were really HARD? Was the bridge one and the sitting one.
PARAGRAPH 3:
Most complex or difficult poses..
Which ones did you try AND FAIL?The one we tried and we failed was the bridge one and the sitting one.
Which ones were really HARD? Was the bridge one and the sitting one.
CONCLUSION:
My favourite one was..
The hardest one was...
On Monday 17th september in the morning Room 7 students did a partner yoga challenge in Room 7. Miss ashley had a slideshow so she showed us what we were doing. My partner was hiria and she said she did this last year
The first thing we did before we get stared was do the roll moved the tables and chairs miss ashley explained what we are doing and then we got into partners. The first pose we did was easy and I felt that it's going to get harder and harder.
We had to make shapes with our bodies which was really challenging but we just keep calm and try our best. Which ones did you try AND FAIL? The one we tried and we failed was the bridge one and the sitting one.Which ones were really HARD? Was the bridge one and the sitting one.
Which ones did you try AND FAIL?The one we tried and we failed was the bridge one and the sitting one. Which ones were really HARD? Was the bridge one and the sitting one. The most complex one was the bridge and the handstand one and the sitting one.
The
My favourite one was The superman one
The hardest one was the bridge and handstand one
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Friday, 14 September 2018
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