NO ESCAPE

Twinkle Twinkle star colours

SOUTH BY SOUTHERN CROSS

NARRATIVE PLAN

Brainstorm of ideas:
Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, , man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking

PEOPLE/SETTING
PROBLEM
SOLUTION
Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,
Car crash
A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service
No glasses so couldn’t see
injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts
Firefighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
On the phone
Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.
Fire extinguisher, put sawdust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.





Title:
Car Crash
Intro
2 sentences
One bright sunny day a drunk man was driving in his car and suddenly his wheel started making loud noises.
Orientation 5-10 sentences
WHEN
WHO
WHAT
WHERE
WHY
HOW
CHARACTERS
The drunk drivers name is John Cena and he is 60 years old. John came near the mountain because there was traffic and then he stopped the car and waiting for the cars to go. He was going to pick his friends up because they were going to eat lunch.
Problem
5-10 sentences
Suddenly he forgot that he left his petrol engine open so he clicked his seat belt and then jumped out of the car because he didn’t want to die.


Solution
5-10 sentences
John got his phone out of his pocket and call the police and the fire fighters. The police and the fire fighters came and the firefighters got there and got there fire extinguisher and put some sawdust on the petrol before the car explodes.
Conclusion
Less than 5 sentences
John said he would never do that ever agin.

Postcards in space

THE MAGICIAN'S ELEPHANT

One freezing morning there was a ten year old boy named Peter. Peter had some money to buy a fish and bread but he saw a fortune teller tent so he went and stood outside the tent feeling sad, lonely and nervous.


Peter decided that if he would go into the fortune teller or buy fish and a bread. He decided that he would go into the fortune teller and then he went in the tent and gave  this girl a coin.

Fairy tale introductions

Once upon a time in a faraway land there was a murderer who lived in a cottage.

Once upon a time
One sunny day
One beautiful bright sunny day
One marvelous day
One horrible rainy day
In a faraway land
In the deepest ocean
In the darkest prison
Far far away
In a dark forest
In a vast desert
In a creepy dungeon
In the scary woods
In a haunted house
In a movie set
In a creepy maze
In a wonderful school
In a small town


There was
A beautiful girl
An old man
Royal family
A wise girl
A handsome man
A traveller
A scary monster
A butler
Guards
Handsome prince
beautiful queen
Creepy clown
Young princess
Royal king
Famous celebrity
A gangster bodyguard
A music producer
A sad servant
A sneaky thief
Who was Lost
Enormously rich
Poor
Diva
Who lived in a cottage
Who had 6 sons and 6 daughters
Had a glass eyeball
Had a ginormous family
Lived in las vegas
Who had robotic legs
Who was a marvellous actor
Who only ever had onions
Who was a robber
Who lived on the streets
Part time DJ part time spy
Who had only leg
Who was a murderer
Who was a huge nerd
Who had one fat eye.

Once upon a time in a faraway land there was a murderer who lived in a cottage.

Room 7 Co-constructed narrative

Title: Room 7  Co-constructed narrative

Labels: writing

House on fire

Hear sirens going off - firemen are coming

Put the fire out with water hoses

Smoke is strong

Problem - there might be people inside?!

PS4 is still inside. - valuables

Clothes are inside. 

Might be cats or dogs inside

Playing fortnite- little boy poured water on the plug. 

Little boy - craig. Blonde hair, 1 metre high, 8 years old, freckles, brown eyes, short curly hair, fortnite t shirt, drinking water, laughed and dropped the cup, or got angry, screamed. 

Title

Fire in the house

Introduction

One sunny beautiful Saturday Craig was playing Fornite with his friend Jack. They had been playing all day long.

Orientation

Craig was a 8 year old boy with blonde, curly hair and chocolate brown eyes. He was wearing his favourite turquoise Fornite shirt and seafoam pants. Jack was 9 and had jet black hair and bright blue eyes. The two boys were playing Fornite in the lounge at Craig’s house. The lounge looked like a pigs sty, with stinky socks, pizza boxes and mountain dew cans everywhere. 

Problem

Craig was sooo engrossed in his game. He leapt out of the bus, pressed X and landed on one of the houses. Craigs thumbs and fingers were starting to ache from playing for sooo long without a break. Jack thought a glass of water might wake him up, so he went to get his friend a cool glass of icy water. He was just strolling back into the messy lounge, when he heard Craig scream “OHHH YEAH HEADSHOT!”. It gave Jack such a fright that he dropped the glass of water, and “Oh no!” he screamed, it tipped straight onto the electrical plug. Craig sniffs “sniff sniff”, “I can smell smoke, is the oven on?”. Jack yells “THERE’S A FIRE, HELP!”. Craig finally looks up from his game to see that the PS4 caught on fire! Craig thought to himself “Dang it, I was about to win!”. The two boys rushed outside leaving all their valuables behind. 

Solution

Jack ran to the neighbours house and asked to borrow Lucy’s phone. “HELP HELP OUR HOUSE IS ON FIRE!”. Craig could hear the sirens of the fire engines getting closer and closer. Jack and Craig tried to comfort each other, but they were panicking so much and couldn’t hear each other over the sirens and blaring smoke alarms. The firetrucks arrived and extinguish the flames in 1 long hour.

Conclusion

The two boys felt depressed. Their game was over, and they didn’t win. And now… their house was destroyed.

Bouncy castle

Last week on Thursday 14th June room 7 went to the bouncy castle near the school hall. There was a lady telling us the rules after that we took our shoes and socks off and lined up in with a buddy. I was with my friend named Hope. It was finally our turn me and Hope went on one each mat and waited for the lady to say go. The lady said go and then we went through little circles then into a fridge then into the washing machines and then we were finish. After that we put our shoes on and then we lined up into two lines and then we walked to our classroom. 

Night light

On Monday I have read a book with my reading group called bright sparks. We read the book called Night light. This is the Google drawing I have done for the facts about the moon

Describing a picture

The Full moon

The full moon The full moon is in the violet blue sky with all the stars shine bright down to the cold freezing river as it reflect upon. The full moon is a white bright moon just like some peoples white teeth. The full moon is the last one to happen in the night time.Full moon is a enormous large circle of grey hard iron. The full moon is like the light in your room but just whiter, brighter and lighter. The full moons bright light is shiny through the blue cold freezing water in the river. The trees are full with dead green leaves as it float down to the violet river as it’s waves swishing through the soil upon the grass. The Clouds are Long and bright Like some of the white Candy floss. Some Clouds Can be Short and long some can be Fluffy and Bright. Most Clouds can be large and some clouds can look Like other stuff like a cat or a dog . If you look in the sky you will see the Clouds moving because the wind is blowing it. The trees are swishing and swaying around and around the sand is kind of blowing away and into the sea and some of the branches are breaking in half and are going on the ground it will go in the sea and be careful.

 

How seasons happen

Inquiry

This is a video of me and my friends video us talking about the planets

Long summers and winter

This is about Long summers and winter

How do seasons happen

Over this week I have been doing this for our inquiry about seasons

Science words

1. Scattered throw in various random directions.

2.Probe thorough investigation into a crime or other matter.

3. Dirty snowballs The comet are sometimes called dirty snowballs because they are made out of lumpy dust and ice.

4. Investigate carry out a careful  or formal inquiry to discover and inspect the facts of (an mistake that has gone wrong , hint, etcetera ) so as to establish the truth.

5. Gravity is when there are no oxygen in space or anywhere else.